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privTri Volpeon Extra @areon@icy.wyvern.rip
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Still working out how to continue on the right page. I keep falling back to writing narrator bubbles to talk about what happened that night and what the protagonist felt. But this approach simply doesn't mesh with my vision. The "awakening" isn't an instant from 0 to 100%, it's a gradual process where the protagonist's mind slowly starts to understand the memories. High-level introspecting would create the impression that he's already fully aware -- something I want to avoid at all costs -- and I also want to rely more on showing rather than telling. So right now, I want to continue without words, but show some struggles that are starting to become apparent (e.g. trouble moving his body because there are impulses to move it like a human body).

No help or tips for this please, I want to work this out myself.