One thing I often notice with first-person views in TF art is that the way the muzzle (beak, whatever) obstructs the view is actually not how you would see it. Normally it's drawn in the center as an opaque blur, but my nose obstructs my view both on the left and on the right side semi-transparently. So it would be more right to have it there twice, but a bit shifted to the left/right and with the right perspective.